In fine lines, rain rolls along filigree filaments,
Collecting at strand’s lowest dip,
Pouring into drops,
Edging to their final fall,
Slipping from their sleeve,
….falling
……….falling
…………….falling,
Dragging tendrils behind,
As gravity pulls the load,
Cohesion, bringing up the rear,
Tears the last liquid from the webs’s grip,
Plunging the whole
….down,
……….down,
…………….down,
Until the earth absorbs
Drops dissolve,
Beings for fleeting moments
That never were…
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Thank you
Submerge: The concrete/shape structure brought the drops to life. The feeling that I am standing in middle reaching my hand to touch.
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Oh, wow! Lovely! So pleased you felt it – stunning!
Thank you – for all your visits, likes and comments! So appreciated! Words to light up our lives! :l
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beautiful words and I like the layout of this poem 🙂
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Thanks Neha! Something a little different for me! 🙂 Pleased you like!
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I’m always agreeing with Cynthia! 😄 so here I am doing it again! She is very worth agreeing with in my opinion! (creep creep creep!) 😊. Love the imagery in this Rob,wonderful
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Thanks Chris! Appreciate your comment as I do Cynthias! And you both taking the time to do it! 🙂
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I like the concrete element here Rob – if that’s the right phrase
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Thank you! Interesting phrase Derrick! 🙂
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I am guessing you had a lot of fun with the look of this poem on the page…delightful!
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Yep! Different for me, hey?! Thanks Cynthia!
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