To say that money
Measures wealth, floods life’s meaning,
Could be just naive
In truth, how a tool is used
Cannot be blamed on the tool.
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Today’s prompt – “to write a palinode…a poem in which the poet retracts a statement made in an earlier poem.”
So, looking at yesterday’s Tanka – consider it retracted! 🙂
(okay, I realize this is not an ode (as in palin-ode) but liked the idea of using the same form for the retraction!). Hope you like it?
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Perfectly stated, thus written!… The last two verses are so accurate!!!…
Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you. Aquileana 😀
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Thanks Aquileana! And for visiting and all the likes and your comments – great to ‘see’ you 🙂 Hope you have an awesome weekend!
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