English Tanka – #4

I gazed upon you
Golden hair ’round sunlit eyes
Painted, tinted skin

Careful with your cigarette
White smoke drifting to blue skies

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© Copyright 2015 Robin McShane

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4 comments on “English Tanka – #4

  1. A great image here Rob. Not sure how you intended it to read but it spoke to me of “all that glitters is not gold”, but anything glittering would be spoilt by the smoke even if the pose looked ‘good”! – Just my take on it. 😊

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