………….He bears the groan,
……….Hears the moan,
…………….Carries on regardless.
………………..Taking life slowly with
…………………..Patience, understanding, and
…………………….Skill.
………………….Having trapped the beast,
………………..Caught him fast,
………………Nowhere left for it to run, it
…………….Gasps.
……………….He severs vessels, slow
……………………To leak,
………………………..Stands back to watch his spectacular
……………………………..Feat.
………………………………..It roars again, it’s
…………………………………..Dying throes,
…………………………………….With blood running thick,
……………………………………….Like streams of molten
…………………………………………Lava.
……………………………………..A few gurgles, a flick of
…………………………………A paw and
……………………………..It is over.
…………………………..The Hunter grins, throws
…………………………Head back, howls his
……………………….Delight.
………………………….Demands a photo of
…………………………….The sight.
………………………………Labels his success,
…………………………………Boasts to all.
……………………………………One wonders,
………………………………………Who is the real
…………………………………….Animal
…………………………………..Here?
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© Copyright 2015 Robin McShane
This is way out of my comfort zone!! Great fun!!
Today’s prompt: Animal; Form: Concrete; Device: Emjambment
Credit and thanks for the title to my good friend at the best coffee house in Pretoria – Hein at Cherry Berry!
Wow!
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Thank you! 😀
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I derived so much from this poem, Rob… thank you very much for sharing 🙂
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That’s great Lily. Thank you for visiting and commenting…means a lot! 🙂
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Vivid and engagement, reminds me of the novel Jock of the Bushveld, by Percy Fitzpatrick.
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*vivid and engaging* sorry.
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Got it! 🙂
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Thank you! Fantastic that it reminded you of a classic! Wow! I’m humbled….and excited! Thanks for visiting and taking the time to comment! Nice to ‘ see’ you! 🙂
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You did all the work and I am oblige to hand your jacket *smiles*
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much appreciated!! 🙂
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Great poem. I wrote about a Lion too, mine sheer silliness compared to yours!
Out of your comfort zone? Splendid very visual poem!
Thank you.
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Thank you for your comment! Will go take a look at yours now! 🙂
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The images in this are striking, and I really love the flow. Great job!
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Thank you!
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It is something to think about. I like it a lot! 🙂
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Thank you…
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I also had difficulty with the format and almost tried what you did (with the full stops) 🙂
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Only way I could make flow! Well…kind of! 🙂
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Excellent! (And frightening)
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Thanks Cynthia! 🙂
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