Fool’s Folly – Poetry 201 – Day 2

there was a young man name of Paul
who wanted to go see it all
he heaved on his load
took off down the road
full folly for finding fool’s fall

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Day 2: Prompt: Journey, Form: limerick, Device: alliteration

Phew! Found this particularly difficult (as you may see!) Fun though! The alliteration may be a little over the top but, hey, we’re playing!! 🙂

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2 comments on “Fool’s Folly – Poetry 201 – Day 2

    • Thanks Cynthia! “Trippingly” alliterated indeed! Nice! 🙂 Wish it did though – this took a bit of work! Thought it would be easy but no…phew! Pleased you liked it – makes it all the more worthwhile! 🙂

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